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PostSubject: Re: 3-Word Story   3-Word Story - Page 4 EmptyMon May 19, 2008 12:55 pm

but accidentally Alanna
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PostSubject: Re: 3-Word Story   3-Word Story - Page 4 EmptyMon May 19, 2008 12:55 pm

pwnd Alk. Then
(no more from me tonight)
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PostSubject: Re: 3-Word Story   3-Word Story - Page 4 EmptyMon May 19, 2008 12:57 pm

MacGyver made a
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PostSubject: Re: 3-Word Story   3-Word Story - Page 4 EmptyMon May 19, 2008 12:58 pm

toothbrush with poo
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PostSubject: Re: 3-Word Story   3-Word Story - Page 4 EmptyMon May 19, 2008 1:16 pm

what was so

( I don`t like that someone changed my sentence from has been killed" to he got killed" - it was correct and I dissagree that sounded wrong -.- )
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PostSubject: Re: 3-Word Story   3-Word Story - Page 4 EmptyMon May 19, 2008 11:12 pm

yummy that Alk
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PostSubject: Re: 3-Word Story   3-Word Story - Page 4 EmptyMon May 19, 2008 11:29 pm

could not stand
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PostSubject: Re: 3-Word Story   3-Word Story - Page 4 EmptyTue May 20, 2008 8:00 am

the toothbrush. then

This is not a grammar lession, behave
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PostSubject: Re: 3-Word Story   3-Word Story - Page 4 EmptyTue May 20, 2008 8:05 am

Jesus was born
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PostSubject: Re: 3-Word Story   3-Word Story - Page 4 EmptyTue May 20, 2008 8:36 am

and everybody got
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PostSubject: Re: 3-Word Story   3-Word Story - Page 4 EmptyTue May 20, 2008 8:45 am

100,000,000 Free Ectos
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PostSubject: Re: 3-Word Story   3-Word Story - Page 4 EmptyTue May 20, 2008 9:00 am

but then they
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PostSubject: Re: 3-Word Story   3-Word Story - Page 4 EmptyTue May 20, 2008 9:56 am

sold them on

Next time you'll be banned from the forum
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PostSubject: Re: 3-Word Story   3-Word Story - Page 4 EmptyTue May 20, 2008 10:02 am

eBay and got
(well, actually it should have been had instead of has. The reason is that you wrote "killed" which is past tense, and therefore it's had and not has. Only a one-letter difference, but means a lot to the sentence as whole. I think everyone got the general idea, and this topic is supposed to be fun, so no more grammar-talk)
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PostSubject: Re: 3-Word Story   3-Word Story - Page 4 EmptyTue May 20, 2008 10:14 am

five Euro so

No need for that
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PostSubject: Re: 3-Word Story   3-Word Story - Page 4 EmptyTue May 20, 2008 10:35 am

he went mad

(That is not the problem. The problem is the meaning of it. The grammar is not wrong, but in the combination of the other words it just sounds wierd. "Has been killed" killed sounds like he's dead already, and being killed again (so does had been though...). But with my post of "but then he" the words "has been killed" won't really fit, as "but then he" is saying that he's doing something or that something is been done to him. So, after thinking about it, you were not wrong in the grammar, it was just the two posts that made it sound wierd. Can we just leave it at that? Either way I'm done with English grammar:P Got enough of that in school already^^)
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PostSubject: Re: 3-Word Story   3-Word Story - Page 4 EmptyTue May 20, 2008 10:47 am

and threw his

(well, we`re talking about the past here and the most important thing for us are results of that what happened in the past, so I used present perfect and it `s correct. I could use past simple here. You`re right Alanna, it can sound weird, but anyway he shouldn`t have changed my sentence)
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PostSubject: Re: 3-Word Story   3-Word Story - Page 4 EmptyTue May 20, 2008 10:59 am

computer into the
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big container filled
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PostSubject: Re: 3-Word Story   3-Word Story - Page 4 EmptyTue May 20, 2008 11:12 am

Avenging Angel Mike wrote:
big container filled
with giant stinky
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PostSubject: Re: 3-Word Story   3-Word Story - Page 4 EmptyTue May 20, 2008 11:18 am

what smells as
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PostSubject: Re: 3-Word Story   3-Word Story - Page 4 EmptyTue May 20, 2008 11:46 am

Avenging Angel Mike.

Behave
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PostSubject: Re: 3-Word Story   3-Word Story - Page 4 EmptyTue May 20, 2008 12:10 pm

>.<
Thought we were done with this...
Maybe lock this one, and start over again?
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PostSubject: Re: 3-Word Story   3-Word Story - Page 4 EmptyTue May 20, 2008 12:21 pm

Continue the flaming and you'll be banned from the forum, Mike and Mastar. Master will be demoted to member as well if he continues
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